Review by House of Fanfic



I is for Intuition

One of the reasons that I enjoyed this story was for
the fact that it included a 3rd person POV.  I love
stories involving others take on the MSR and when 
those interact with Mulder and Scully try to get them
to admit their feelings for each other.  I cant say 
as I could see Mulder outright telling someone that  
she's incredibly gorgeous and 'take your breath away'
sexy", as we know he is not that open about his 
feelings towards her.  But I found the remainder of 
that particular scene to be believable on the part of
Mulder, as far as revealing his total feelings for 
Scully to a 3rd party.  As far as the role of Scully in
this scene, I don't see it as a realistic situation 
character wise, I don't feel that she would encourage
or allow a 3rd party to interrogate Mulder about his 
feelings for her whilst she witnesses the whole 
conversation.   I could see Scully giving explanation
for a situation such as this and she having reasons to
explain Mulder's comments, simply continuing her state
of denial.  The whole discussion of feelings between 
our characters and a third party just did not sit right
with me.  I found the car conversation enlightening 
and believable as well as the consummation scene.  All
in all Donnilee did it again, her theme was good, the
smut was great and it was an overall great story.  I 
give it a rating of 7.

ScullyRox