Review by House of Fanfic




P is for Perverted by Donnilee

I definitely found this story as one of Donnilee's darker
themed stories.  It amazes me how she can continue to come
up with such interesting themes, while not being repetitive.
The idea of Mulder becoming obsessed with Scully and using
someone else as a substitute was very interesting.  Oddly
enough I don't see that as being a whole lot out of character,
I can totally see Mulder (off-screen of course) engaging 
in sexual relations with another women while thinking of Scully.
Donnilee's characterization of Mulder's self flagellation and
subsequent self abuse I felt was true to character. We have 
seen such behavior from Mulder in the past in regards to his 
guilt over things happening to Scully, that he feels responsible
for, and while she was missing.  Mulder is such a strong character, 
except for when Scully is not in his life, this is his week spot,
he becomes the total opposite.  Weak, vulnerable, unsure Mulder.
This is what we see in this story.  Mulder feels that his
indiscretions will be totally unforgivable by Scully, therefore
leading to her no longer wanting to be a part of his life, he
cannot live without her and decides that he will not. 
My favorite part of the story is at the end were Scully 
basically tells Mulder to shut up and listen telling him how
it was going to be and that not everything is his fault.  I
love 'Strong, Authoritative' Scully!  As always the smut was
excellent, bravo again Donnilee.  I rate this story an 8 out
of 10 for original story line, in-character representations
and of course good old fashioned smut.


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