Subj:Review of Lullaby in the Sky by Donnilee Date:3/1/2002 9:58:38 PM Pacific Standard Time From:SaraMarsten To:hofxf@hotmail.com Review of Lullaby in the Sky by Donnilee Review by Sara Marsten Rating: 8 of 10 Lullaby in the Sky is the third story in the Lullaby Series by Donnilee. This series is a post requiem story. In the first story, Mulder has come back to find Scully six months pregnant. The only way he could secure his release was to strike a deal with the aliens. In the second story, Scully delivers twins and the aliens decide to take them for a while, but forget to ask first. This third story is another great read, but you are guaranteed to be lost if you don't read the first two. In Lullaby in the Sky, Donnilee takes Mulder and Scully through a complex maze of events that borders on being an Aaron Spelling mini-series. Mulder has been back for about seven months. He and Scully are newlyweds with twins. The twins have already been kidnapped by aliens, along with Scully's Mother, and are exhibiting some unusual traits. Mulder has acquired psychic powers as a result of the abduction. Doggett and Reyes rekindle their relationship with a big spark. And, Scully may be pregnant again. At one point in the story, Scully and Mulder have an encounter with the aliens. Scully is thinking to herself and in her thoughts uses one of my favorite lines in this story, "Most People got involved in interdepartmental or jurisdictional squabbles, but that wasn't good enough for Mulder and I. No, we had to get in between shadow government players and aliens. If I told our story to any normal human being, they would probably laugh in my face. It sounded ludicrous even to me…and I was living it." This is very representative of the story as a whole. Unbelievable events keep occurring.....very Carter-esque. This story has all sorts of X-Files like elements: spontaneous ovulation, psychic abilities, nice aliens, not-so-nice aliens, uber twins, alien tests, alien ships in the middle of the Arizona desert, and Mulder singing lullabies (that is almost an X- Files in itself). There is some clumsiness with the story teller's "point of view" through out the story. This is ok for the most part, however, it is a little clumsy in some areas and it can take a sentence or two before the reader can determine who is speaking or thinking. This is unusual to see in Donnilee's stories. In spite of that minor flaw, this series is a great ride! Even though the entire series is substantial in size (588 KB), it won't disappoint. Read this story and the entire series. If you like the Lullaby Series get your feedback to Donnilee. Although this story gives the reader closure, it has enough elements left open ended, there is a definite potential for a story four! Thanks, Sara